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by Merialeth

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is a very erotic story. However, each part is too short, and you need to review your each part before submitting it. There are numerous typos, misspelled words and missing words. Read the story out loud, and really listen to how it sounds. That should make these errors jump out to be corrected.

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Here to read/write some exciting erotic stories. Hoping to post something soon. Hope to get some good feed back

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