All Comments on 'Little White Lies Ch. 15'

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TypelipsTypelipsover 1 year ago

Amazing Chapter!

Hardrider56Hardrider56over 1 year ago

Great chapter to tbis story. Looks like Jessie might have just opened more than a can of worms. Pretty sure Alex figured it out and is not bothered by what Jessie was talking about

MentalcaseMentalcaseover 1 year agoAuthor

@anonymous. I know! I will revisit, but I've got to narrow down the scope of my work. 1 story at a time.

toobytoobyover 1 year ago

Good one MC! Jessie has more fun than any of your other female characters, I think. More than Kelly, Alex, Toni or any others. Not because of shear numbers of partners. All the three I named have had more. But because she's so carefree and silly 😀 I still love your other sagas, like MSMM, but this is my favorite. You still beat out many other perfectly fine authors, because you give your characters hearts and souls!

MentalcaseMentalcaseover 1 year agoAuthor

@tooby Thanks my friend! Jessie is definitely fun to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Being a women the best way to describe how I feel about this story is to use the authors own words:

“Totally not fucking Weird”... Jack’s sarcastic response to Dex fucking others with Jessie’s approval

“Dude, that’s fucked up”... Jessie fucking their dad

“Dude, that’s a fucked up story”...Dex’s Birthday fuck fest

“You fucking filthy tramp” ...what Dex (and us readers think) calls Jessie

“You know how ridiculous you are” ...Jacks (and everyone else reading this) thinks of Jessie

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Agree with everyone else’s comments, but this sis till a fun read!

Can we get a few chapters dedicated to just Donna being max submissive and Dex taking full ownership of Donna??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More. I think you need to bring in Sam into Jessie’s world

NipkorNipkor7 months ago

Loved this chapter , very sexy , will Jessie and dad or not mmmmm can't wait to read on . X

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News: 2/9/2023 - Lots of work going on. Been sick too. Chapters are coming. On a side note, other authors are apparently being accused of plagiarizing my stuff. Folks, this isn't a treatise on world peace. Its porn in literary form. Take it easy, okay? The world sucks ...

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