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Radmatt0352Radmatt0352about 3 years ago

I like the growth of the relationship between Jessica and Dawn (?) There are some aspects of the main character that I can relate to, which I guess makes the story interesting. I look forward to seeing how it pans out. Keep up the good work.

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I appreciate everyone's interest in my writing, and all the feedback and criticism. I'm glad that my writing could touch each an every one of you. I initially started writing my series, "Live on Me," as a way to express my deeper desires and fantasies. Being owned by someone...

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