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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun3 months ago

So hot! Really well done, especially in so few words!

Djmac1031Djmac10313 months ago

Great use of imagery and combining senses to create feelings and passion. Well done.

AlinaXAlinaX3 months ago

Loved the fusion of sex and sound.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeff3 months ago

Normally, I'm not thrilled with these 750 word stories, BUT, this was exceptionally well done. Thanks.

Campus77Campus773 months ago

The story was complete from beginning to end. The power of the music, the throb of the drums, the passion of her body, made a beautiful conclusion.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Great birthday present!

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