All Comments on 'Liz Licked At The Club'

Another one of those story.

There is a tendency for some authors (especially novice Erotica writers) to see their objective as getting as many sex acts described in a few words. A correlated aspect is to ignore character description and development, plot, seduction, and other such trivialities. Like spoonsful of sugar, it makes for quick satiation and subsequent boredom!

3*

Should read

(...get many sex acts described in few words!)

i.e. delete the 'as'

Looking forward to more of your experiences.

Would like to know where that club is. Sounds like a great place to 'meet' new friends.

about as erotic as watching grass grow.

pleasure garden club?