All Comments on 'Lo-Fi'

I guessed from your location that you were a Geordie lass!

100% correct. Newcastle born and bred. :)

Short and sweet. Well written, interesting and left me wanting to read your other stories 5*

Thank you, @Biggalute! Much appreciated!

ok i hate to give neg feedback , first, it was a really good story well done good plan, but now the neg it left me wanting much more and i mean much, you could have put that as part one then gone back to when her sister asked her bribed her to pose how she felt how they did the photos (you done some of that) where they did the photos could be woods beach etc , i like long stories i like to get into the story like i am there , thanks for the story and will read more of your work , my comments are from me other people may like and love the short story keep writing. thanks Nakedarts

@NakedArts - thanks for the words. I see your point. It's a short story, originally posted on FetLife and later YouPorn, and those platforms are notorious for readers with very, very small attention spans, which is why I moved over here. I lost readers on FetLife because readers felt that the stories were too long.

Lo-Fi certainly could be longer. As it stands, the photo session with my sister only lasted fifteen minutes, if that, so that's all there is to say. The gallery experience was difficult, once the identity of the secret model was "out", so to speak.

Some years later, I actually became a life model for a local artist and I'll post that story as a follow up to this one. I don't regard your comments as at all negative. Asking for more proves I did something right and I'll be pleased to post "The Model Life" in the next couple of days.

Pretty sure I remember "Lo-Fi"...🤔 Wish I'd gone to see it now. 😁

What a great little story! Well written and from the comments a true story. Despite the brevity it is 5*. Thanks for posting and I will read more by you.