All Comments on 'Locktober Day 02 - Good Morning'

by ElliotSkellington

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TNsourdoughTNsourdough25 days ago

Nice continuation, but distracting in a few spots because of spelling and punctuation problems that running a spell/grammar check would have found. I'd still like to see more "showing" and less "telling".

agentstixagentstix24 days ago

Licking her ass the next morning was definitely the right thing to do, she's amazing!

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