All Comments on 'Lois Visits Mr. A'

You certainly got the sexy part of this story down! It's short and sweet, but maybe a little too short. I think it could've been written with just a bit more detail- even if it's a second sex scene with Mr. A. Lois gets around a lot, but what makes Mr. A so special? You could've focused on that more with some extra writing. Otherwise, good job :)