All Comments on 'Lola Wants Ch. 03'

now its tyme for some beat down she needs to hurry up and fuck jen up for putting that shit in her drink that bitch got an ass kicking comming

This chapter better than the last. Don't make us wait too long for the next one.

This chapter was written better (the story telling was more like chapter 1) than the last but there were some major flubs (like switching between first and third person - it happens) and gaps which I had no problem over looking. I must say Gauge has been redeemed (for now) and I hope he keeps up the good work. I am curious where the story goes from here. (Hmm, do they realize they forgot the condom on their second attempt? Oops! Hahahaha.) Keep up the good work and update sooooooon!

Love your work; you've made and avid reader of me and I shall be checking in for more. You have been bookmarked!!! :) write more soon

I love it!

Orpheum69