by Valsona
The problem with this is priorities. Nick has become her priority and gets the best of Sara, while her boyfriend, the guy she SAYS she loves, gets the leftovers.
Loves isnt in words, it’s in actions and her actions say that Jake isn’t her love.
As the author, treating Jake as the foil is overdone and boring. You’ve written him in such a way that he is a caricature, just the guy you can’t humiliate and treat like garbage as needed,
Always a fun and sexy way to start a visit of your Bo with a nasty cum filled airport pick up. Lol. These young kids the things they do for fun. But that is the joy of being able to make the choice we choose to make for entertainment. Fun story. Cheers
Fucking Nick when she should have been picking up Jake was awesome. And Sara is becoming ever more dominant with Jake. I really want to see where this goes.
I'm waiting for more, I hope don't wait much like this time 😜😁. I'm joking 😊
Seriously one of the hottest stories I’ve ever read. Looking forward to part 5!!
"I can't say no to him" <"I don't want to say no to him"
Also just drop random mentions of his race. The fact she's objectifying Nick racially is a turn off. It's 2022 ffs
"Also just drop random mentions of his race ... it's 2022 ffs."
It's a stroke story tagged as "Interracial Love;" go back to reddit if you want to be a bluenose scold.
God, I love these two together SO MUCH!! I want him to lick Sara clean of all Nick's cum!! I'm jealous
I really loved this story far. Hoping you are still writing, because your stories are great. Fingers crossed for part 5.