All Comments on 'Long-distance with Sara Pt. 04'

by Valsona

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 1 year ago

The problem with this is priorities. Nick has become her priority and gets the best of Sara, while her boyfriend, the guy she SAYS she loves, gets the leftovers.

Loves isnt in words, it’s in actions and her actions say that Jake isn’t her love.

As the author, treating Jake as the foil is overdone and boring. You’ve written him in such a way that he is a caricature, just the guy you can’t humiliate and treat like garbage as needed,

Qwer12Qwer12over 1 year ago
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Always a fun and sexy way to start a visit of your Bo with a nasty cum filled airport pick up. Lol. These young kids the things they do for fun. But that is the joy of being able to make the choice we choose to make for entertainment. Fun story. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why bother? Really.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

love this! can't wait for more

fayspgfayspgover 1 year ago

Love this series! Can’t wait to read more!

Al_AnonAl_Anonover 1 year ago

Fucking Nick when she should have been picking up Jake was awesome. And Sara is becoming ever more dominant with Jake. I really want to see where this goes.

GURUcult2021GURUcult2021over 1 year ago

I'm waiting for more, I hope don't wait much like this time 😜😁. I'm joking 😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Seriously one of the hottest stories I’ve ever read. Looking forward to part 5!!

bluepixiegurl316bluepixiegurl316over 1 year ago

"I can't say no to him" <"I don't want to say no to him"

Also just drop random mentions of his race. The fact she's objectifying Nick racially is a turn off. It's 2022 ffs

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"Also just drop random mentions of his race ... it's 2022 ffs."

It's a stroke story tagged as "Interracial Love;" go back to reddit if you want to be a bluenose scold.

GURUcult2021GURUcult2021over 1 year ago

Valsona, where are you gone?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice job. Are you going to make a part 5?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Come on, where are we gonna read the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Don't go away mad, just go away you mad cow...

tsmaurtsmaurabout 1 year ago

looking forward the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

God, I love these two together SO MUCH!! I want him to lick Sara clean of all Nick's cum!! I'm jealous

cuckylovechildcuckylovechildabout 1 year ago

I really loved this story far. Hoping you are still writing, because your stories are great. Fingers crossed for part 5.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This is driving me absolutely WILD!! I'm in LOVE with Sara!!

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