All Comments on 'Long Lost Friend'

Fun read!

The intensely descriptive empotions and action gripped me and sent shivers through my spine. Though I generally do not get into "second person" narrative, this story held my interest and allowed me to observe rather than feel like the writer's puppet.

Very well-paced and snappy. On one hand it wouldn't be hard for someone else to write a very similar story. Are very detailed characters necessary in erotica, or do the majority of readers want stories that could very well be about themselves? Once more, your writing was excellent, it really grabs you by the nuts.