All Comments on 'Long Love Broken'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

do a second chapter please

SantacruzmanSantacruzmanalmost 6 years ago
Love your writing

This was very entertaining and loved the back story and characters. Hope you do more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
A Boiled Frog

Seems to borrow heavily from noobdude’s A Boilded Frog story in the bringing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

wasn't this same story already told awhile back

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Interesting story

I think this story is well written. And has a few twists to keep readers engaged. Also a subliminal anti-human trafficking message

chefjess2039chefjess2039about 1 year ago

Another story about an evil woman out to destroy her husband not worth reading come out with an original story where the wife is not evil

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--- Just a little note here --- Every story, with the exception of the 'Long Love Broken' set, is related. I have five now (16 Oct 19) but there are more on the way. This idea started back in 2004 and initially manifested in 'Member 13231.' I stopped for a while, playing w...

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