All Comments on 'Long Night with Officer Sadie'

by MargeauxDeLaCroix

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Is this where the Story ends?? You haven't given any information whether your planning on writing more because write now you cannot call this a foot worship story!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Continuing?

Yeah I agree, if this is just part 1 of a series you should title it as such. At the moment we're left hanging with a story which seems incomplete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

is that it? you don't make it clear whether you plan on continuing it. This part could be a good introduction but it needs the long night otherwise it's just a boring 10 minutes with officer sadie

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