by MargeauxDeLaCroix
Is this where the Story ends?? You haven't given any information whether your planning on writing more because write now you cannot call this a foot worship story!!
Yeah I agree, if this is just part 1 of a series you should title it as such. At the moment we're left hanging with a story which seems incomplete.
is that it? you don't make it clear whether you plan on continuing it. This part could be a good introduction but it needs the long night otherwise it's just a boring 10 minutes with officer sadie