All Comments on 'Long Story Short Pt. 02'

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Timtom12Timtom12about 1 year ago

I'm loving this. Not sex heavy, but pretty funny to observe.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Can I apply this in real life too? For research purposes of course!

damnmad660damnmad660about 1 year ago
Fun Story.

I like how its heavy on the humour. A great little read. 5 stars.

DanDelawareDanDelawareabout 1 year ago

Finally, a Literotica story that’s fun to read! Thank you for an entirely new perspective on the Mind Control genre.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This one is promising to be very fun so I hope it'll last. I'm looking forward to the following !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This series is so much fun!

MW_1977MW_1977about 1 year ago

This is funny, sweet honest and filthy and glorious:) Please, MORE!

Architect theArchitect theabout 1 year ago

This is amazing. I love it.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Laughing so much. Great writing! Thanks!

onlyshecumsonlyshecums5 months ago

This is a great and interesting story. Nice nuance. Nice balance between him being an evil overlord and just a nice guy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

"She sucked Jim's cock like her gag reflex owed her money."

I've read A LOT of stories on this site - this is still my all-time favorite line and gets a chuckle every time I re-read this story.

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