All Comments on 'Long Time No See'

I am sorry to say but your spelling is awful, but you still get 5 stars for a good tale, looking forward to morning hangover sex.

Was this written by an AI program? The dialogue is awful.

Great story please keep writing

Very nice. I was hard the whole time I was reading it.

Very nice story. I was hard the whole time I was reading it.

Good story, although i am not sure if English is the authors 1st language as their needs to be a few revisions to sort out the grammar.

You need a good editor. There are many writing errors. Formatting, spelling, word usage, etc,, all need work.

Agree about the spelling. Haven't seen it worse for some time.

Just wanted to drop by and say thanks for reading my incoherent bullshit and providing your feedback. Definitely didn't expect so many people reading it. Sorry for that spelling, didn't want to make it that bad. Maybe I should do some proof reading and editing before publishing something else next time ;)

Hot story, although it reads as written by someone for whom English is a 2nd language. Those ideas and a good sub-editor would make a winning combo.

It reads like the author's first language is not English which would be fine if they had bothered proofing it and had it edited before posting. Honestly, there might not be anything worse than an author who outright tells us they did not proofread or edit before posting while acknowledging the story needs both.

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I was confused and put off by the format changing throughout the story. With some paragraphs utilizing quotation marks for dialogue and regular formatting and some set off by dashes with very little punctuation, it reads like random parts of the story were ignored and remained in rough draft form or the author occasionally got tired of punctuation and just didn't use it before drifting into use again. Totally perplexing.

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For these reasons I couldn't read all the way through.