All Comments on 'Looda Fucks the World Pt. 01'

Nice story, excellent pacing and style, just watch your punctuation.

i'v read some of your other work. its good. this is MUCH better. I love the slow corruption angle. kept it going, this is a pretty epic story arc.

thanks for reading and leaving comments everyone!

I’m glad this story is the best because it was also the most recent

One I’ve written. It’s actually a vote-for-the-adventure story, but literotica doesn’t allow links so I can’t take votes from here.

If you have any specific opinions on why you like it better than the other ones, I’d love to hear them. Feedback helps me improve as a writer.

And I’ll watch the punctuation ;)

That was an amazing read. The transformations are interesting, mildly graphic, but not off putting. Could almost write for the fenoxo teams

I need more of this oh so amazing story.

But I hope you won't make her pussy disappear. But you can give her an additional cock. Or two!

And give her wings and demon heels and horns!

Ofc,all in due time.