by Desired4U
A slow sensual build up- love it! Looking forward to reading part 2. More teasing perhaps?
Why be such a prick? If you can write a better story, then do so and shut the hell up. Guys come here to read a fantasy about wives with other men. This story is perfect.
Compliment the story of you even read it, but don't complain about someone else's reaction to it. Too much reaction to comments, not enough to really poor, template, cuck stories.