Lost in Hawaii Ch. 02

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"Rule number three. You will wake me up every morning with a blow job." I growled at him and he retaliated by pinching my nipples hard. The pain zinged down my body, straight to my cock making it jump and twitch. "Ooohh, somebody has sensitive nipples," Mitchell crooned in delight. "We'll be exploring your sensitivity. Rule number four, obedience will be rewarded. Disobedience will be met with punishment. And I have all kinds of ways to punish you. Don't test my patients, baby. You'll end up paying the price. So, tomorrow if you don't wake me up with a blowjob you'll be getting a spanking. I love to spank my lovers." He whispered it like a sensuous promise in my ear. "I've had lots of practice tanning hides and I have been waiting a long time for you."

The kidnapping asshole released me and went to the door. He put a sign up with my four new rules. My heart sank as I realized he was seriously going to play this out all summer. All summer, and I had no say in any of it.

"Did you figure out the bracelets, necklace and cuffs, baby?" I nodded in weary, momentary, defeat. "I have a small little key that will release them. Right now it's in the safe so don't bother trying to find it."

He gently lifted the necklace and fingered it. His warm fingers grazed my collar bode. "This isn't a necklace. It's a collar so that I can lead you around, or put you in your place. Your leash is hanging by the door."

Mitchell walked behind me and wrapped one hand tight around my neck, his other pulled me close to his body. The slight squeeze on my neck had my heart racing.

"Baby, you need to understand that I don't want to hurt you out of punishment. A little bit of pain can add to sexual pleasure," he whispered harshly in my ear. "But pain, for the sake of pain or correction, is not a turn on for me. Please don't make me hurt you that way. You're no masochist outside of the bed. But I have a feeling that in the sack you want, you need to be dominated. I think you proved that to both of us just now." He slowly let go with a kiss to my ear. "Well, enough said. I'm gonna get us underway."

I watched him go with my arms roped to the ceiling. My legs were spread by a bar and every inch of me was naked and exposed. I couldn't help the fact that my cock was still pointed in his direction.

I'd never been so horny in my life.

This was not good.

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is stupid! No one is going to trust his homo meathead friend, who talks gay shit all the time. So predictable, he's going to be used and abused, "trained" and when offered his release and revenge, they'll predictably go gay and live happily ever after as butt munchers.

BurntOrangeWriterBurntOrangeWriter9 months agoAuthor

Budickulous, you are awesome, good sir! Hopefully the end is satisfying and.... Probably not what you are expecting! Like I said, I'm definitely in my own universe when story ideas come. Some nay like em, others won't. To each their own.

BurntOrangeWriterBurntOrangeWriter9 months agoAuthor

MarcLuciFer, I do understand where you are coming from. I had a choice between gay male and non-consent. From what I've read there are a lot of non-consent on the gay male side. The non-consent seems to be more hetero. The next chapters are under non-consent because the story does have done more ups and dark lows. Thank you for the remark on how it is written! I appreciate it!! Don't know why my brain went this way but I ran with it. Almost done with the last few chapters.

MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer9 months ago

The definition of a sociopath (the term I used in my comment) is a person who consistently shows no regard for right or wrong and ignores the rights and feelings of others. Very clearly Mitchell is demonstrating a textbook case of that behavior in chapter #2 of what I also said in my comment was a well written story. :-)

BidickulousBidickulous9 months ago

Give me a break, negative commenters. Is Mitchell as asshole? Absolutely. Psychotic? Come on! The story is just getting started; maybe he is, but how does Walker’s history with Mitchell play in this? Jeeze, give the author a chance to develop this further before condemning it! It is clearly labeled NonConsent, maybe BOW should have added BDSM, but hey, first time author, be nice! Constructive criticism is better than flaming.

Look at the way this is written and have a little faith. Do I like what Mitchell is doing? Of course not. Do I want to strangle the prick, or do I wish Walker would chew his dick off during whatever blowjob service is required? Sure, why not? Is it going to happen? Obviously not, we know they’re both alive and functioning at the end. Deep breath – let’s see what happens.

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