All Comments on 'Louise Ch. 05'

Please let Barb reject Hans. I'm usually all for mates but I think that Hans could do better. Introduce a cousin of Lou and Kev for Hans and kick Barb back to where she came from....PLEASE PLEASE

What did he ever do to deserve to have a mate like Barb . I feel sorry for the guy i think if i was him i be heading out to find Mr Van Helsing at least that way it be quick and merciful.

i am glad that Louise is accepting Nathan. Bravo for her standing up to Barb. I am looking forward to seeing their relationship blossom

I am also enjoying how supportive Kevyn is being without interfering I can not wait for the next chapter Thank you for posting it

Can't wait for 6! Well done Kal per usual!

Thank you!

M1

who the hell did Hans piss off to end up with Bitch Barbie as his mate? I would so reject her ass in a heartbeat! This is one character of yours that's got a long road to redemption.

there is a lil part in Barb, that craves love, and now she is going to get that. SURE IT WILL TAKE FEW HARD SPANKING frm Hans, but she will be a good mate. But boy, Hans, he sure gotta kick the 3 fates~

there is a lil part in Barb, that craves love, and now she is going to get that. SURE IT WILL TAKE FEW HARD SPANKING frm Hans, but she will be a good mate. But boy, Hans, he sure gotta kick the 3 fates~

I feel bad for Hans but im sure he can put Barb in her place... and show her who's really runnin things!!! (If Barb is Hans mate)and I luv how Louise stood up to Barb.

Barb is in serious need of a beat down and I hope Louise hands her, her tush and leave her a broken sad woman, what an Evillina

Hans and Barb as possible mates... now that a life time of misery. I can't wait how you spend that.

After I have read that Hans and Barb are mates, I cackled so loud and hard that I wasn't paying attention to how I was sitting in my chair. The damned thang tipped over and I fell backwards and on the floor.

Agreeing with blkhrt, I think Hans can handle Barb. Show her life isn't all about materialistic things. Lol I don have to admit that when I found out that Hans and Barb are mates I found myself laughing...a lot. I really like Hans so I hope that him and Barb end up together. He seems to have a good head on his shoulders.He could probably show her what real love is. Plus I think it'll be really funny to read. :P

I'm so happy Louise is okay. I was worried that she was over using her power to much. Poor girl. So, Jonesy isn't a vampire or a human? So many question I have. ._______.;

Okay, with all the different personalities these three sisters have I'm really curious about the other siblings. =/

Also, if it's not to much trouble would it be possible to get a more description on what Barb and Louise look like? I started reading Patrick so I know what Kevyn looks like to me, but I like to imagine what each character looks like.

Thank you for the update. I think I might reread it a couple more times.

Louise you handled that ho Barb quite well. I still hate Barb though and I wish that she would get run over by a bus. Poor Hans, he deserves a better human being as a mate. Awesome!!!!

as much as i love your stories having barb meet a vampire mate seems kinda "easy way out" instead of putting her in her place and send her ass packing like she needs. by giving her a vamp mate she will just get worse because she will take all the good things we have come to love about the sinclaire clan and twist it. she is not able to see the good in things and is only out for herself nothing a mate can fix.

You've written how beautiful Barb is (on the outside). We know she's disgusting on the inside so what does she look like? She's thinner than Kev and Lou and several shades lighter. Give us more description please. Does Lou have dimples when she laughs? Long lashes? Almond shaped eyes?

I love that you took time totell us why Barb's greedy and self centered. I like her LESS now hahahaha! Poor Hans. Make Barb reject him just to spare him.

Love your stuff. You're one of the most entertaining writers on this site. Thank you for continuing to do this for us.

I think its awesome that Hans and Barb are mates. He wont put up with her crap and will tell her about herself. Fantastic! I love this story, Its so amazing

I'm so glad Louise is getting stronger and stading up for herself. Poor Hans he seems like a nice guy. He shouldn't be stuck with a selfish money hungry bitch like Barb as his mate. But if anyone can call her out on her bullshit and put her in her place it's Hans. So It will definitley be interesting to read their story. Like Patrick people are capable change so hopefully Barb can get it together.

This is the first time in history I hope to have two good comments back to back:

ONE......EPIC LINE TIME! There was nothing left for her there other than family and she still had three weeks to land either Nathan Sinclaire or another man who would be capable of supporting her in the lifestyle in which she craved and felt that she deserved....who groaned when they saw this?

TWO....here Hans...we need to take you out and get you drunk dude....poor mate

Hans Who did you piss off in a former life?

Here man.... here is a bottle of jack daniels....on me...

Great update and wow I didn't see that coming that poor Hans would end up being her mate woe is he and had to tell her off too he must really be kicking himself there has got to be a better way if she realize it she's surely not gonna like the life style that she will have to live even though she won't be poor she won't be rich either and being comfortable isn't a bad thing but I'm sure she won't see it that way! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen in the next update so please update again really soon I'm really liking this story love this family thanks!!

There must be a good reason that Hans is Barbara's mate. Maybe he is the only one with the potential to bring out the best in her. But I doubt it will be easy. Maybe she needs to lose absolutely everything before she will develop the capacity to appreciate what she has.

I was wondering are you going to make more stories based on the Yancy Family Clan. Since in the chapter Patrick had mentioned that more of the family had or may have personal gifts?

Maybe Barb can get permanent amnesia and forget she is such a bioootch.

First and foremost wonderful update you answered a number of my questions surrounding Barb. It appears that Barb sole existence in life up to this point was one of spectator in her own life. Her father nailed it from early on, her incessant greed blinded her to having a furfulling life. This trip to see her sisters may have started out as "a gold hunting expedition" but I suspect this trip will be the intervention needed to excise the demons within Barb. It's going to be interesting to see how you develope Hans and Barb. Getting her to the point of focusing less on materialism, position and title, yes Hans has his work cut out. It would defiantely be fun to watch, literally the revamping of Barb evolving into who she is destined to be. I am interested in finding out more about the maternal grandmother, Kevyn mentioned she had some sort of psychic ability where did it derived from? It appears that once "the Yancy" come in contact with a supernatural being that has a bearing on their well-being it amplify their psychic ability.

The Yancy clan is an interesting bunch, I would love to see a story developed of healing the hurt of the older Yancy children who received the brunt. Of the proverty growing up with meager means in poverty left an indelible mark on each of them which explains a bit of their persona. Barb isn't the only greedy one with useful gift.

i think the title says it all, Hans the poor man at least knows what his mate is like, i am hoping Barb will realize what kind of woman she is but i seriously doubt it.

Donna

poor barbie doll.. She's in over her head....

Lovely one kala, u're d best.

you will never end up reading this...there are 25 in front of mine. That's okay these are my comments and I get to say what I want whether you read them or not....I love it. The more affection Louise receives the stronger she gets. And that Nathan wants her, well she can no longer doubt that after his confession,and she wants Nathan has added to her confusion. I look forward to not only watching Louise bloom into her true self, but watching her do this while being loved by Nathan. Hey this is pretty good and you probably won't even read it...hehe-he

Barb is such a jealous person. Why couldn't she be happy for her sisters?

Part of me really wants Barb to be punished for being such a beyotch. I hope Hans really gives her a run for her money and she really feels Louise's wrath before they make up and it's all better. Sometimes, in the all "let's just get along & be happy" moment, I wonder WHERE'S THE JUSTICE?!!!

If I were Barb's mom & she threw a fit like that, she automatically would not be going to ANYBODY'S prom until she gave a full out apology to everyone at the table, especially her father, along with a complete explanation as to WHY she was so wrong. And then for pennance, she'd have to do a service project helping those who had even less than she did, so she could learn to appreciate what she did have. Only AFTER all that was done, would I even CONSIDER letting her go ANYWHERE, let alone the prom.

It's as though she was being rewarded for showing her behind and throwing a tantrum... and why she grew to become a jealous, conniving, bratty adult. The lesson learned-- yell and cream & have a fit & people will give me my way. Ugggh! It just ticks me off b/c that's exactly what I see parents do with their kids now!

I wish I would've tried something like that with my parents. I would have NEVER lived to tell the story! I'm not even 30, but they were straight OLD-SCHOOL!

And Kala.... amazing work as usual! Thanks for the regular, high quality updates! They make you the BEST author on Lit!

Wow wasn't expecting Hans and Barb to be fated for each other. I thought it would be Jonsey and Barb.

I just love watching Louise blossom like this. I love how you always let your characters and story lines develop slowly. looking forward to more.

I just love it!! I'm glad to see Louise coming into her own. I love how you develop your characters. I so hope that Barb is taught a lesson before she hooks up with Hans. I'm so addicted. Everyday I check Lit to see if there's any update. You are one of the best writers on Lit. I hope that you will try and get your stories publish. I will be the first in line to buy anything that you publish.

Great story hopefully Louise will realize that she loves Nathan and their relationship will progress. Also Hans and Barbra will develop a relationship and barbra will grow out of her selfish ways and love Hans and her family for what they are.

Poor Hans, Barb is his mate. So Barb had no traumatic experiences growing up; just a selfish b*tch then and now. Can't wait for the next installment of Louise. Love it!

Wow, Hans cares about Barb?? For some reason, I thought Jonesy was Barb's mate. Still, Barb doesn't deserve anyone until she gets her mind right. She's too selfish and bitter to be with anyone right now and she doesn't think she's wrong in how she behaves towards people. I'm glad that Louise stood up to her and that her and Nathan continue to grow closer.

Poor Hans is Barb's mate????? He may want to forget about having a mate or choke the shit out of Barb! Maybe it's good Nathan protected Barb's mind from Louise, she would have fried it!

Maybe a dumb question but Hans Is a Vampire, right?

I understand the dynamics and the need for the back-story regarding the sisters and how it is all connected. Barbara is giving me a headache with all of her self-centered and pushy attitude. Frankly, Louise and Kevyn should beat the hell out of her. SMH at that character. I almost did not read this story because of Barb.