All Comments on 'Louise Gives Her Client a Hand'

Interesting premise.

Sex moves along too fast though, and lacks details.

At least some dialog between them would have helped. Mrs Robson could/should have given some directions as to how she wanted to be touched. And she could/should have reacted specifically to different approaches Louise was taking. Just saying there was an orgasm, and then a couple more isn't really erotic.

And you wrote KNEED when you meant KNEAD. If you're writing about a massage (or making bread) you need to use the correct word.

Four stars for potential.

Great story! would love to read a sequel about when Louise gets home. Ignore nit picking comments and keep writing

Hot as hell! A great story from a talented woman.

Louise's internal struggle was insightful. A young, curious mind taking a leap into a taboo world.