All Comments on 'Love beyond Blue Balls Ch. 03'

You really gotta work on your English - I often just did not actually understand what you were trying to say. Sorry if that sounds harsh, but it's true, and distinct, compared to other stories. On the up&encouraging side: the story lives through emotions and sensitivity, it's not a boring, cookie-cutter, 'badly drawn ' porn fantasy .

So it's worth another edit!.. maybe by an editor/ someone else but yourself.

Cheers, and keep going!

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