All Comments on 'Love Comes Second Ch. 08'

This is a good story, despite what the critics and detractor say. Douglas and Jade love each other, and your story shows that. I would hope you would continue this story as you find time, maybe even giving the maturing couple more detailed descriptions. I imagine the very sexy Douglas with a bit of sexy chest hair for his manly and muscular chest. I think Jade and Douglas can grown into a real deep love for each other! I like reading your stories!