All Comments on 'Love in an Elevator'

I didn't see any pierced nipples.

Why do the females in your illustrated stories always look like unmitigated whores? Is this a secret fetish of yours, to dress like a slut? I've decided this is the last of your stories I'll waste time reading. Oh yes, there'll be those who sing your praise and talk about how great a writer you are ..... it just won't be me. Adios. 1/5

What's with the ugly girls? You usually have good looking illustrations. This was a horror film. Nothing to do with color or ethnicity. Just bad drawings.

Excellent. Very enjoyable.

That is incredibly erotic writing! Up there with the all-time best.

Once again Jasmine a great story and superb pics

Charles

I love the way your mind works!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not for me sorry not as good as your other work

Nice reference to American Gods

Absolutely your worst story, and the illustration work was school grade at best

Not really my thing but all the best with the Contest.

Welllllllll....

The story was ok.......

but the illustrations were laughable and ruined it.

Sometimes a picture can totally destroy a thousand words!!!!

One of your best! Lots of references to our favourite characters : Megan, Jenny, Ashley and the Le Château Club. Nice pic of Rosie!

Horrible illustrations and probably the worst story you have written

hot and erotic, 5 stars, good luck in the contest

Not the worst youve written but no where close to the best. My biggest complaint was NOT ONCE DID YOU MENTION AEROSMITH EVEN THOUGH YOU STOLE THEIR SONG TITLE 1/5 stars

God damnit, enough with the lovey dovey CRAP, I found you because of the interracial domination stories which you haven't written in a few years now, you're getting boring

I don't get why people can't write a lesbian story without needing to bad mouth men. Not my thing but good luck to u

Illustrated caricatures bordering on racist coupled with just ... a really poor story to try and mash the 3d barbies together

Excellent just excellent you always push the right buttons you’re lesbian story’s always make me wish I was a girl as they enjoy themselves more with each other and the clothes they can try

Oxo Brett

I agree with Anonymous. The illustrated caricatures were totally distracting. I agree with CryingDevil125, the story was boring. I love and enjoy your stories that you written but this one I was disappointed in :(

which app/program do you use for the illustrations?

Story is very good. The art work is fantastic Tat on Miko’s back is gorgeous!

My favorite author, but the illustrations ruined the story.

I agree

Nice one. Better than average SSL, and obviously SSL is better than average Lit! .

top notch as always

Regardless of the subject matter, your erotic story telling and writing style are a level above most writers. This is another example of your sensual gifted talents in story telling.

Bud

323. Many people didn’t care for this story, but I liked it along with the illustrations. It did not have blackmail like so many others.

Good writing. Love the connection and with other firs rate stories

Love this author. Not a fan of the illustrations. Kind of ruined the story for me. The faces just look a little crazy.