All Comments on 'Love in Chains Ch. 05'

this is just sad i mean to let someone degrade and hurt someone you say you love just should not happen adam should be stronger than this and maybe in the end get his ass kicked

I'm waiting for something really, really horrible to happen to Adam.

One of your best chapters yet and your chapters are lovely. I know I'm writing to you well after the fact, but I have to comment on the work. You've pulled me in and made the story something I care about.

I'm not going to ask you to set the scene. I want that, but it's way beyond that now. I am going to ask for more details. You have to put all the writing on the page. That's your job. Don't skip over things. Describe Nye's feelings at dinner. Describe Adam after Nye is finished with him. God is in the details, but so is the devil. This chapter needs to be twice as long.

What's happening with Mir and Kane. Don't drop them.