All Comments on 'Love is Tough Game Ch. 01'

The second paragraph starts: "Neither, Amanda or Jason didn't want to see each other." This could be: "Neither Amanda nor Jason wanted to see each other." That's just for starters -- the rest is riddled with mistakes! Learn to write grammatical English before you publish anything else!

Good idea but you need to get an editor. Your English language and composition skills are atrocious.

Like the previous commentators said - you really need an editor.