All Comments on 'Love. Lust. Lost. Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good story, bad ending

I love the story and even though the title basically spells it out, I hoped it would end differently. Why would it end that way if his heart is breaking and she is crying? You gotta do a fourth and fix it. Even if it's a year or two later. At least make it happy-for-now if not happy-for-ever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story

It's really meaningful as well as erotic, great job,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Best story ever

This story almost made me cry! You definitely have talent. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Awesome

Please, add on to this story, great work, please add on more to this tale soon

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