by Gratefulhubby
What a piece-of-shit, weak, spineless arsehole. Since he got hard so quickly why oh why didn't he fuck Becky, just as Chad had fucked his GF? It was Chad who said he wanted to swop so why didn't this loser fuck Chads GF when he saw Chad fuck his? Pathetic swine. Plus, get rid of this disgusting, controlling, manipulative Sarah. She's just a bitch, trying to spin things at the end to suit her. Drop her immediately.
And he was stupid enough to marry the bitch, and stay married for 20 or more years. How many times did she cheat on him during that time?? 100? 1000??? Nice marriage.
Wow. She easily gives her virginity to someone else because her boy friend got a blowjob. She could have sucked Chads cock to get even. Then of all things she insults him because of dick size. I would have dumped her ass right then.
Coulda been good had you written an entire story, not just the beginning. Would've been good to see how Sarah rationalized her promiscuity with Chad, in light of her denying her BF all that time. And BF could've gotten seconds, insttead of releasing impotently on her thighs. But this was always going to be a cuck tale, no?
Not a Loving Wives story. Action for the story take place before marriage. More of a First Time tale and would be better placed in that category. This is a dismal account of two young people who have yet to learn how to communicate with each other. The male main character is never named so I'll call him MC. Sarah and MC have invested a lot in each other by the time of this event. MC did not communicate, he assumed Sarah's silence equalled permission. We all know when we assume something we are about to make an ASS out of U and ME! Sarah did say anything, that is to say, Sarah did not communicate with MC. Sarah has been holding onto her virginity since beginning a exclusive relationship with MC. She knows MC is "busting at the seams" to be with her. When Becky started towards MC she remained silent knowing what Becky was up for, MC kept silent also. Both Sarah and MC had opportunity to say something and neither took it. They failed to communicate. As a result Sarah threw away the rarest and most prized possession any woman has. So rare a possession, she is provided only one in her entire lifetime! And Sarah allowed a bottom feeder like Chad to "gobble" down her virginity like a hungry dog eating a chunk of meat. Chad, ignorant, never stopping to savor the rare cut provided him, Chad, clueless, not realizing he wolfed down the only serving of Sarah more rightfully belonging to MC. As far as technicalities go, MC is still a virgin. Yes MC succumbed to Becky's advances ON HIM but he didn't have vaginal sex with her! But SARAH MADE THE MOVE on Chad. Sarah removed her clothing and physically went to Chad, climbing on his lap! Sarah willingly gave to Chad the prize MC had so long desired! Never, ever, can she give MC that same precious gift. It is forever gone! Sarah has less of a moral high ground here. Throughout their relationship Sarah rebuffed MC's loving advances towards her. In spite she threw away her most precious gift spurning MC's love. Bitch! - TANSTAAFL
Why would you love a cheating whore and why did you post this in the LW section? Dumb.
not even good for masturbation. So full of clichés, it left me nauseated. I wonder, what is the meaning of "I love you" for this author? Does he know what love is? Clue, love and masturbation are different things. You may love to masturbate, but you will never find a hotwife who really loves her cuck. What's there to love?
Pretty good story. 6 stars to writer. Reminds me of a time ...where I was dating a beautiful preacher's daughter just to loose her cuz I felt up her bare breast just to find out a couple years later that she had been shacked up with some bikers and was screwing all of them!!!
Great little tale about a man and wife and how their incredible marriage began. It’s obvious that this marriage turns out to be so much stronger than the ones of the sad little boys whining about it. It’s clear they couldn’t keep their women happy and now they hate reading about marriages where the couples enjoy their lives. Keep it up and let’s hear more about these two and the fun they have.
with the comment 'my body'. That was his cue to walk out and leave her there.
Very poor tribute to Double Date. pt 1 or pt 2. Waste of time reading.. 2 stars
@Anonymous
*1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BF & GF ARE NOT LOVING WIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHILL OUT dude you're gonna give yourself a heart attack. A story that might be in the wrong category isn't worth getting all stressed out.
A better attitude will get better results.
Not likely at all…. Prude virgin jumps a giant cock and loves it, more likely in pain on the floor with a bruised cervix
Not impressed, especially with the ending. For the record, as someone who has been here 20+ years, Laurel (the owner) said years ago that boyfriend, girlfriend, fiance, fiancee are all good in LW.