All Comments on 'Love on a Picnic Blanket'

by JZ_Couple

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WifeOfJayWifeOfJay4 months ago

Your writing, whether it's erotic or whether it's fuelled by pure love, is beautiful.

This piece is everything to me.

Bargyn1Bargyn14 months ago

Erotica for sure! Beautifully descriptive.

JZ_CoupleJZ_Couple4 months agoAuthor

To Bargyn1, thank you for taking the time to leave a comment and I really am glad you enjoyed reading about us.

To my gorgeous wife, my writing is fuelled by you, you’re beautiful in every way, inside and out. I love that you loved this.

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New to Lit, and joined with my wife and I have written 2 stories. Married to Zoe, currently writing about things we have done mixed with things we’d like to do. I’m 28, she is 37.