All Comments on 'Love Out in The Sun'

by Verhaalen

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SyzyguySyzyguy9 months ago

Good to read an LW story where they love one another (and not someone else). Thank you.

bobareenobobareeno9 months ago

The present tense is awkward.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Wow a story about two people faithful to each other in a good marriage? Almost unheard of around here. Thanks!

EastCoaster1EastCoaster19 months ago

This is a very nice story about a married couple who not only really love each other, but express that love to each other honestly and thoroughly.

A story like this in LW...

...whatta concept !

5 ***** !

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story about a long time faithful loving relationship!

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