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by l_svensen

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ukdukeukdukeover 3 years ago
Oh Dear!

This started off so well. You wee setting out your stall and then....BANG!

All done in two seconds!

This premise has plenty of life in it and, from the little we have, it seems you write well.

Please revisit and work it out.

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A full-time, home-school mother... student of the world and eternal thinker. A compulsive writer who tries to keep true to real life. I have my world, Terrenden, which has received the bulk of my written work - about the A'mara sub-race. I currently serialize my works on the H...