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t8ntliklyt8ntliklyabout 2 years ago

Pretty good story so far. Too bad I feel that Amy is just a little parent enabled tramp. I'm not the author obviously, but I see an awful avalanche coming Michael finds out that Amy fucked his dad.

Northpacific2017Northpacific2017about 2 years ago

At times confusing, almost to the point of frustration. Over all in my opinion very well done , still lots of potential for more.Like what happens five years in the future?

racfguyracfguyover 1 year ago

Maggie laughed on the other end of the line. "I can only imagine what you three were doing. I thought Ronnie was an asshole."

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Ronnie is an asshole, Amy is a slut. Here's hoping things don't get too out of hand for Michael.

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