by ajroye
A wonderful series you put together. I always look forward to reading your offerings. Well done.
I loved the whole story. I loved the character development. Wasn’t sure if #14 was the end or not. I liked the conversation with Mary… laughter, tears, damn fine story. Thanks for writing, thanks for sharing
I look forward to your next effort~!!!
Going to miss this couple/this family. So well written thanks for the adventure.
Cheers
SAGE
Damn, I got all teary at the start of this chapter and I couldn't put it down until the last paragraph was read and the tissues were disposed of.
What a fascinating read from whoa to go and I can't wait for the next adventure from your fertile imagination. You Sir, are a Tina Turner,,,,,,, Simply the Best !!!
I have completely loved this whole series. I felt bad when Terry and Traci died in the previous chapter, but other than that I have really enjoyed everything. Thank you so much.
Really well written,I have just re-read the whole series after reading your Amy prequel works.Thanks once more for the entertaining and moving story
Very well done and concluded in such an excellent way.
There is something that I'd like to pass on to you and that is the plural of "sister in law". It is not "sister in laws", but rather "sisters in law". Same for brothers in law. Just a constructive criticism for your future writings.
It's i literotica but does that mean they must fuck on every page. There is to little of the story around.