All Comments on 'Love Train Pt. 01'

I enjoyed the development of the characters. It's interesting and I am looking forward to how it develops.

I really enjoyed this and hopefully 🤞 a new chapter

I liked it. Waiting for the next part. The age threw me off. Were you 21 when you had your son who's now 2.5 years? Did you enter college at 16?

Slow and aimless. It feels like a lot of words used to communicate very little. Contradictions, as someone else pointed out. Sentences that are phrases, not sentences. It failed to hold my interest or inspire me to wonder where the story is going.

Sounds like a one and done. It has been a year, and not a peep.

Unless the author decides to write more. Don't waste you time here.