All Comments on 'Lovely Auntie Ch. 07'

by erosdon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Going on the wrong track

I think you made a big mistake by turning the conspiracy to a not so great theme.

I suggest you try to bring back the spice in the story.

You should keep the daughters out of Manish's sexual advances.

erosdonerosdonover 10 years agoAuthor
Main story

My main theme is still on manish and neeta. I am just using her daughters as props. Yeah but I should have mentioned the husband. Thanks for reading.

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