All Comments on 'Loving Family Pt. 01: Sam'

Can't wait for part 2!

Great first effort. Thanks for sharing.

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Can't wait to read how it goes with the mom.

That was f'in hot!

For your first submission, I think you did a super job!! Obviously you have paid attention to how some of the better erotic story writers have done it. Please continue with this story line because it deserves your telling of this tale, as you see it. You created a very good point of view. I hope the entire family becomes involved.

For a first story, it was amazing. I would not be surprised if you had a good career with erotic writing. Please More..

Well done! It was nice to read an incest story that started with intention rather than accident, especially as it was initiated by the one more vulnerable.

Yea, I liked that. Thanks.

I enjoyed it a lot. Well written and planned out well. I normally don't give comments just the stars. But this is worth a comment I need to read part 2 which is next I wait to see where they all go with this she left every avenue open. So congrats 🎉