Loving Mom

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Susan was knocked back on her heels, She grabbed him and held so tight he thought she would break a rib. "Oh honey. Nothing could make me happier!"

David backed up and tried to look serious. "There is only one huge problem we haven't even discussed." The smile started melting from her face. "Now you will be both a milf and a cougar with a young cub."

She laughed, "You are young, alright. Young enough for a spanking!"She tried to step around and smack his butt. She chased him up the stairs. He ran in the bedroom and just froze. The laugh died on her lips. "What, darling?"

" I just realized we will sleep in this bed and then in any bed, together for the rest of our lives."

She shoved David onto the bed. "How about we officially make it ours right now?"

He thought, "My darling lover for the rest of my life. This better not be a dream."

It was, but not the kind when you sleep. He was right about the beds.

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I read the comments and realized I do jump from first person to third. I have tried to edit this into third person. I also tried to break up the long paragraphs. I appreciate the constructive criticism.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I'm glad you are getting constructive criticism. A lot of times I read that people leave derogatory comments about someone's story and it's not only by an anonymous person but also, I'm sure, by one who has never even contributed story. Sorry about my anonymous but Literotica doesn't seem t recognize my email. Great story by the way!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Damn that was tender and beautiful. Worthy of a second chapter with them having moved to a new location and knocking mommy up, starting their family, and so on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it and the way you brought them together was perfect and loved how he brought his mother out of her spell was just perfect gave it 5 stars!! Would love it if you wrote more till they moved away and married and she had his children!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dad442Dad442about 1 year ago

I read this story thee way you wrote it and loved it. The emotions of divorce, and of secret passion, combine to bring a mother and son to realize their love and passion for one another. Beautifully written.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

Loved the story. While growing up I happened to see my mother naked a couple of times, but I liked it better when she was wearing panties and a bra or one of her slips. I always thought she was the prettiest woman around. I'm surprised David didn't use Susan's panties to masturbate with, like most boys do. Thanks

OnrecessOnrecessover 1 year agoAuthor

I am in the process of an edit, Mostly to change to 3rd person. Thanks for the constructive criticism. I forgot you couldn't do both. Oops! College was a long time ago. As far as proofreading, that is the hardest part! I check 3 or 4 tines and find errors every time!

I am going to look for an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like the story, maybe because I did fuck my Mother from my 16th year and it was so great and beautiful.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 1 year ago
Loves grown deep

A pure form of double love. 1st as mother/son then as lovers. A great gradual attraction with natural scepticism that provides such a real feeling.

hrobbiehrobbieover 1 year ago

Poor writing; 1st or 3rd person, make up our mind. Proofread.

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