All Comments on 'Loving Summer'

Can’t believe this is your first story. I loved it and hope you continue it!

I’m no critic but I really enjoyed the story anxiously awaiting more pls..

Aside from the cute little title with its play on the word 'Summer,' I don't see how this had anything to do with the theme of the contest. Two star deduction even before we talk about the story itself, which was a solid four stars.

I really enjoyed the story, and I hope you continue this into a series. However, I did not feel like the final sex scene delivered what was promised in the interactions with Austin. A bit too soft for my taste. Maybe show us a bit more of Austin the next time?

ok ...

Not a lot of training for Summer as a sub but perhaps you'll develop this in some sequels. A good start though and quite erotic.

Exceptionally well written and stunningly erotic. Exquisite 5 star heat.

So silly but fun & exciting.