All Comments on 'Loyalty Test with Pornstar Ch. 03'

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epic31epic318 months ago

very exciting sequel, I can't wait to find out how it ends and I'm enjoying the evolution of the story.

TaletalentTaletalent8 months ago

Excellent. Love that it builds slowly but with foreshadowing. A stimulating story and a beautifully written story. to

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Praying there is a part 4 where the cuckolding is announced?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Please end this story

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Wow!

Eze325Eze3258 months ago

Love it! Hope there's more

shvg65shvg658 months ago

This is an excelent example of a boil the frog, seduction story. The boyfriend got the pot, filled it with water, and Kyle talked him into getting in. Slowly Kyle started turning up the fire under the pot by seducing Jen. I'm sure in the next episode, the boyfriend is going to find the water has gotten to hot for him to climb

out. Kyle is going to turn up the fire ( f**king Jen and sending videos) and gleefully watch as the boyfriend sits in the boiling water crying, knowing there is nothing he can do about it. Thanks for one of the best stories so far.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Fantastic story! keep going dude you are great writer

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

He has already lost her. He knows, but he's in denial.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

There is a hope that the bf of Jen will see a same ring he has lost in Kyle's next post. He may see some very valuable and memorable things of his and his gf on kyle's posts.

In one hand Jan shows deep love to the bf on the other hand she cheats on him but the bf remains clueless but start to doubt her infedility on seeing those lovely and memorable things on the post. But still his love for her will say a totally different thing.

I wish the bf get humiliated to his extreme but still loves Jen and cry for her love

I love ur story bro. A lot of love from my side

surfin24surfin248 months ago

What started as a hot cuckold/sharing story turned into a moronic ntr-style story.

There's no titillation from things the reader already knows to be true but are concealed from/is oblivious to the protagonist.

A far better and hotter ending would have seen Kyle successful with Jen up until the point of sex then putting a decision to the protagonist whether he should proceed or drop it, and the protagonist's hardon decides for him, while they proceed with the narration.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I hope we get to

Find out all the things that happened behind the scenes, every secret every lie every cheat lol I really love this story, can’t imagine how it’s going to end

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Soon The bf will witness the painful anal destruction of Jan. Of course he will nt see her face but will feel the pain and agony of the slut. The slut will be willing to do anything to please her master 😁😀

kattkatt7 months ago

Really enjoying this read. In once sense you can guess the inevitable but then again maybe not. Really like the edge to the story. Hope we will see another chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Please go on

sims71sims717 months ago

Really loving this series. Cant wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Please please finish

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Been loving this, really hoping for more soon

Asas13Asas137 months ago

I hope soon no4 of this story. You are fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

waiting for new update. your writings is superb

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Is there any possibility that the bf of Jane will witness some more disturbing scenes in Kyle post like the rough fuck of his ex or his own sister or sister in law or his crush

epic31epic316 months ago

almost 2 months since the last episode, too bad I really liked this story

KatameyKatamey6 months ago

Too much good writing to not have a conclusion. Hopefully more to come.

Nuisance451Nuisance4516 months ago

Still looking forward to a part 4 whenever you decide to write won.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Keen on the next part this was really good

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Is there any hope for next update?

jamaidajamaida5 months ago

Please do write the follow-ups. This is brilliant

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Would be nice to see new part until Christmas :)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Really want to see a part 4

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