All Comments on 'Loyalty Test with Pornstar Ch. 04'

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Bham487Bham4874 months ago

Wow great copy of several stories on here.

epic31epic314 months ago

brilliant conclusion, I would have loved to see a continuation of his adventure with an even more perverse Rick :)

Thanks for this fantastic work

vitochivitochi4 months ago

I don’t understand these confused people. She isn’t his fiancée. She’s Kyle’s. She is much more open and intimate with Kyle. She does keep secrets from Kyle. She shares her body and fantasies with Kyle. MC is just a voyeur into Kyle’s relationship with her like watching a television and thinking you are friends with Rachel, Ross and Phoebe.

wallace99wallace994 months ago

Well done! I would love to read another chapter about Jen & Rick

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchman4 months ago
Very good

I enjoyed this story. I enjoy stories like this, until more and more men are brought into it, and the wife becomes a whore that will spread her legs for anyone. So I hope this series ends herel

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Damn good writing.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Okay, so you were working on you opus here. Nice

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The story was so good but lost its interest in the end

I wish the kyle humiliate and torture The bf of Jane through different type of manipulation. It should be like the bf doesn't like her to be with kyle but she goes to him and does evey nasty things that the bf wishes to do

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Weird. What's the point in having this kind of "relationship". She's fucking around, lying all the time, treating him like crap. In true cuckolding, there is love. There is no love left here. Just neglect.

nike5nike54 months ago

Can't wait for the next chapter to find out what Rick did to Jen

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Humiliate the fiancee even more. Add past crush and sister of the fiancee in Kyle's website. I want to see the fiancee got humiliated more and more seeing different post of kyle. Maybe jane knowingly feed the fiancee the cum of kyle. U can add more humiliation.

I love the story a lot.

Eze325Eze3254 months ago

Love it hope there's more

FunnyFearFunnyFear4 months ago

It's not like she really cares about her fiancé, she just doesn't want to be alone. It leaves a bad taste in the mouth.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Excellent story. I really hope you continue this with more chapters.

Robgmen7865Robgmen78653 months ago

This story is amazing. Looking forward to more in the future.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Please tell me you are planning on continuing this story. I can't get enough of it.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

This is one of the best, most nuanced, stories on the web-site. The fiancee is disappointed that Jen is progressively less turned on to him; he is frustrated that his own fantasy of being an erotic god (destroying all boundaries) is not panning out. So he invents his own punitive god to destroy his beloved. Not only is he complicit in the smashing of her dignity, he has invented it.. I note that Jen becomes more and more of a cipher (blank slate) as the story goes on. I suppose that the limited parameters of this forum preclude a more fulsome account of what might have been going on in her head as the seduction proceeded.

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