All Comments on 'Luciana at the Success Party'

loved it

This is what this category is all about. Great story!

Brilliant! Other than the set up, it feels completely authentic, which is what makes it such a great read. You should consider a sequel.

Great exhibitionist story!

Welcome to Literotica, and a nice job on your first story. Looking forward to more contributions from you in the future.

Thank you all for the kind words. I get the point about the set up; getting Luciana into this situation requires a little indulgence.

Cheers!

Great first story. My only criticism is that i wish there have been an incentive for Luciana not to welsh on the bet.

Congratulations on a great first story. Hope to read many more from you in the near future!

This is your first story? Wow. I do love tales of ladies being talked out of their clothes, and this is one of the best. You inspire me as a fellow writer.

So I wonder if she will be bare for the teams party? Will she be the only one dare to be bare. good job thanks for sharing. staying tune for chapter 2?

Pappasleaze!

Excellent. really looking forward to the party. Hope they all adopt the 'uniform', especially Hailey