All Comments on 'Lucky Nerd'

Way too many spelling and grammar errors! Yech!

Really enjoyed it!

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY.

"... She recognized this person as Tom, another former school acquaintance, who she remembered as being a bit of a loser and a nerd. He was quite chubby and still had some pimples on his face. Maxine also noticed that Tom wasn't even dancing even though he was on the dancefloor. What he was actually doing was standing still, staring at Maxine, or more specifically, her tits..."

Maxine is a keeper. End of story. Full stop.

"Maxine finally arrived party". When does the story become readable?!