All Comments on 'Lucky You Are Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Seriously?!?!

Yes,yes,FUCK YES! When he dared her to kiss Jared with his taste in her mouth...*eye twitching*

Please update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This was fucking fabulous seriously! Please update soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yes!

This was amazing! Well written with a good plot. Please update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
well....

damn! that was HOTT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
5

I had to give this 1 a 5 star rating

C_frommnC_frommnover 12 years ago
Just

Found and read your Story. Like the Characters cant wait to see where they go from Here. I think Lil Demi is in for a World of Change and she is'nt prepared for all of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
OMG!!!!

It's amazing how good your writing is. This got to be one of the recent best interracial so far .......please give us more !!!!!!!

Soul_childSoul_childover 12 years ago
Nice

One that I just stumbled on... Post soon...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
omg

omg please finish!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
omg

where are you?you have to finish I'm addicted!

CAColemanCAColemanalmost 12 years ago
What the hell!!!!!!!!

Where is the rest of this story...C'mon sh***...

IvanniaroseIvanniaroseover 11 years ago
Love it

Pleaseeeeeeee finish it!!! xoxo

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIover 11 years ago
Julian is BOSS!

Please finish!! I am loving the ALPHA MALE characteristics. When he said "NOW KISS JARED WITH THE TASTE OF ME IN YOUR MOTH. I DARE YOU" I was like DAYUM!!

nuckin1futsnixnuckin1futsnixabout 11 years ago
lol madisonkai

ya said it and my favorite line too...DAYUM!!!!that was some smoking my-ass-is-on-fire-cuz-i-sold-my-soul-to-the-devil!!!! shit wow i loved it oh my goddddddddddddd!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
!!!!

I freaking love it!!! It seems like all the good story are always not done!!:(

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OMG

Finish this story please!!!!!

PureSeduction2urMind69PureSeduction2urMind69about 8 years ago
More please!!!

OMG!!! Your story is amazingly hot!!! Please write another chapter, I must know how it ends!!!! I'd absolutely love to belong to Julian!!!

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBB8 months ago

Oh FFS! Disrespect for your fans or what?

Great story, unfinished for so many years

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