All Comments on 'Lucy the Switch Ch. 02 - Meeting Mark'

by CloverLily

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visioneervisioneerover 5 years ago

Lily, this a quite good second chapter. I am enjoying this threesome's adventures.

I noticed a few issues in your prose that could benefit from an editor. I do this occasionally, so contact me if interested.

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My name is Lily and I'm a switchy 22 year old grad student. I live in Germany, but am often somewhere else. I love cute lingerie, fun sex toys, and elaborate rope work. I like detailed role-play and watching porn, and have a HARD limit when it comes to age play, cero toleran...