All Comments on 'Lucy's Awakening'

by AlonThor

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great 1st chapter

Would love to see where this goes

krish_domkrish_domabout 3 years ago

My favorite story in literotica.

Can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

good story, but some spelling issues: Caribbean is how the ocean is spelled. Also, Peak is the top of a mountain or something high up, when it's about looking its 'Peek', 'Peeked' etc. I think I noticed a few others. I still voted five stars, spell check doesn't catch a lot.

AlonThorAlonThorabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the positive comments and sorry about the errors.

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