All Comments on 'Luisa's Journey Pt. 04'

Such a sweet and emotional chapter. I am sure that is how most people in their situations would like it to be and I hope it happens for them all. Realism like this is lacking in many stories.

I have read through this entire series, and as a trans girl myself, I must say that how Lusia is written feels astoundingly real. Her anxieties, her joys; they all are beautifully heartfelt, and her experience with Trevor made me tear up a little, it was so sweet.

The only thing this story was lacking was in depth. This is so wonderful, I want to see what this would be like if it was twice as long; if the relationships between Luisa and the people in her life were shown in more detail and dramatic nuance.

Long story short, this is excellent. Keep up the amazing work :)