All Comments on 'Luke & Lucia Pt. 06'

Wonderful story, all the way through. I did catch a small error on the last page, though. KATE was pregnant with the second child, not Lucy. It did not detract from your work, though. I DO wish we were able to correct things like this, even after being published (As I have a few flubs), but I get the problems involved with that. I hope to see lots more from you!

Thank's Erica really appreciate that! Can't believe I didn't see that big blunder - SO ANNOYING. I agree it would be nice to be able to fix stuff, but hey ho only so many hours in the day and all that!

Hello Gorgeous

I loved your story, probably because so many stories here are unhappy and fraught with angst that I like to seek out a happy place. You have created a world of love and with characters who are believable and where everything is achievable went we have a little luck. Please keep writing and bring a little brightness to this sad and depressing world. With Love

Cristal, your writing just gets better. I laughed and I cried. I can't help being a helpless romantic. We all have our vulnerabilities and insecurities- it was delightful to see the characters overcome them. Lovely, gentle and very sexy. I loved the ball gown dressing scene. I think we all dream of being a 'princess' for a day. 5 hearts and 5 stars

Thank you! We can make a bit of our own luck of course, but we all need fate to smile on us and aim for our dreams, especially if we dare to be different! I do love happy endings even if they are so passé, but a hand job on a massage table is definitely just an ending! I for one certainly dream of that ball gown scene Chloe, just as I dream of being a fabulous dancer :-)

A terrific series, one I thoroughly enjoyed. Being trans myself, I easily imagined myself in the lead role.