All Comments on 'Luna and Feliciana Ch. 04'

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dcayenna over 1 year ago

Your stories are really beautiful, I love their fair speed in hypnotic progress and I hope you will continue to write.

Thank you

Anonymousover 1 year ago

Please release the next part

Anonymousover 1 year ago

This is my favorite series so far on this site. I really can't wait to see where it goes! I'm begging for chapter 5!

Anonymous6 months ago

This is a decent story chain, but all the conditioning is coming across as very shallow. "You will like when I look at you." "You will be jealous if I don't look at you more." "You want me to touch you." On top of these, MC has done virtually nothing to break down the "no incest" boundary for either woman. The conditioning isn't opening any emotional doors or actually bringing him closer to the women in his life.

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