All Comments on 'Luna vs. The Camp Ch. 07'

-At this point, I was so turned on by having experienced a good old fashioned string of forfeits like the old days, plus seeing all the girls naked, I was pretty ready to just

After all was said and done with my forfeit,-

Just a sentence that seemed to be cut off that I saw. A decent chapter overall, more transitory than most of your work, but necessary nonetheless. It still has some fun scenes in it, even if overall, the whole thing feels just a little rushed. I'll admit, it was a bit surprising to see that this apparently 3 weeks into the camp now when all the previous chapters in the Luna Camp series seemed to be going one day after another, but then again, making this a 28 Chapter sequel series with her sequestered from the world at large would probably burn all the good ideas for this set up and still have a fair bit of re-doing which would subsequently cheapen the experience. Overall, I like the chapter, but I'm really looking forward to how it seems to be setting up an explosive climax-pun intended-for most likely the next chapter of Luna Vs. The Camp. I'm looking forward to seeing how you finish this series off.