All Comments on 'Lunatic Luau Ch. 01'

WOW.........that's all i can say...

Living in the Tidewater area, I know what the Lunatic Luau is and could visualize the lawn, vendors and bathroom layout. Great start to the story.

Love your writing style. Very hot!

I do hope this story was one of your real adventures. It certainly had an authenticity to it and was quite well-written. If it didn't really happen, I hope you have the chance to make it come true sometime.

That's so fucking good! I can't wait for the next chapter!