All Comments on 'Lust at First Sight Bk. 02 Pt. 01'

Fuck yeah. Really enjoyed it and can't wait for more. Also ignore the salty ass bitches that leave negative comments.

Lovely, stories as always Darth_Aussie!!!

Just as I was thinking that we had lost you when you come back with a bang! As before well written and well plotted. You are a true gem and a talented writer.

Really looking forward to more. Especially Amanda and Nick. I would like more dialogue between the sisters. Maybe get into what they’re thinking a little more. Can’t wait for the next chapters

Brilliant as usual.

I am not really into incest but this story is still pretty hot. Good character development and enough conflict to keep it interesting. I also like the fact that even though this is a harem-type story, it’s more compelling since the MC doesn’t automatically get all the girls. You’re a talented writer and thank you for sharing your work! Looking forward to the next installment in this one, not to mention the other stories you have on this site. Well done!

That was an incredible start to bk 2. This tension with amanda is killing me. Happy to see you back with this awesome story.

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Can you not write anything that is not awesome? I have loved every chapter of Sister's and Lust, all of them are straight up 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥. Please keep them coming!!!!

Thanks for the next part. Loved it.

Great stuff - really very happy that you've been able to continue this series :)

Many thanks for sharing with us.

Must agree with "onekinkyguy69"s comments - love your work !!!

i really like this story, i do however think the Amanda will she or wont she has gone on for too long. other than that this story is amazing

Bud, great to see you back. I am happy to see Nick and the girls. I love all your stories and look forward to the next.

Have a good one

Just effing awesome!

God I want to marry Emily. She sounds so cute, cool and hot! Terrific chapter!

Loved it!! The build up between the scenes with the sisters is masterful, just the right amount of tension. Cannot wait for more, thank you so much! :)

Really great start of Book 2 and an excellent return of a great writer like you Darth! 👍

Can't wait for more chapters/parts and see Nick take Mel in the next one and then finally Amanda. I think Craig is going to mess up big time and Amanda will finally see the light and Nick will make her a happier person.

As for the next Harem Sisters, take as much time as you can. I think Jason (Harem) will date Liz in the future and the double date with Hayley & Natalie will be EPIC!! ❤

See you again next time Dude!!

Perfect. Love the story.

I continue to look forward to your writing. But, please, there is no way in hell that Amanda stays with her douche of a BF in even the remotest fantasy. Cut that fucker loose!!!!!!!!!

I guess my checking each day for another chapter is just too uch of a torment.I am addicted and must have my next fix. Whats with Jen? Is she pregnant with Nick's baby? Is that going to be written into the plot? I know it would be difficult twist to write into the plot, but it isn't like she's a crone or otherwise unattractive. Its just a hard twist to add, especially with the tension between Nick and Amanda. Looking forward to whatever you bring into the story since from the Harem Sisters we already know that they will ultimately be a band. Its jusdt the plot between now and then... Bring it on

First off glad to see you back I feel like I've been waiting for ages. 2nd have you heard of podia? It's like patreon but they allow nsfw stuff including incest and all that if you ever decide not upload ur stuff there I'll sub!

Too much foreshadowing so I'm going to bust your secret - When do they form the band and start making bank? Off the charts story, mate, but the time between releases faces me to reread the previous chapter to get reoriented. Such a cross to bare - LOL! 5*

Going well, but please could Nick clock Craig in the next installment, he really deserves a beating. Hope Beyond Sol is going well.

Finally! Good to have you back!! Great start to book 2!

Enjoyed reading it .

Weighting on the next chapter to see what happens with Amanda.

Glad to see the return of this story. I'm hooked, please continue!

Worth the wait!!! 5 stars.

Thank you for another great chapter, love your work. Next chapter please.

I was sooo looking forward to this chapter and it proved to be everything l hoped it would be.

What’s with Erica?

Is she a porn actress and Mel does her photos and film. Something is happening there that’s out of kilter.

Imagine sleeping with all these sisters, you would go crazy in such A polyamorous relationship.

Who would be a Queen Bee and who would set the roster??

Not Nick, he’d be the last to know.

How would the jealousy be kept under control. If all the sisters loved him equally, there would eventually be tension and jealousy, personalities ensure that. Control is next to impossible amongst this many lovers..

Could be an interesting part of the mix to raise tension and drama in the novel.

Next chapter please

5/5

Awesome writing. He sure knows how to stretch a story to the maximum without losing the heat and momentum. Looking forward to the next chapters

Need more-Well written and constructed

I just finished binge reading the story up to now and I love it a lot. To me, it's the sign of a great story when I'm more interested in the evolving interpersonal relationships, than in just getting to the sex scenes. And when we do get to the sex scenes, it's more about the deepening emotional connections, rather than just siblings getting their rocks off together.

One thing has been niggling at the logical part of my brain, though. We know that Emily and Amelia are twins. When they were introduced in the story, you said, "Amelia was a spitting image of her twin...", which leads us to believe that, despite their separate choices in appearance (clothing, hair style, etc.), they are identical, rather than fraternal twins. Yet in the final chapters of Book 1, you began to describe Amelia as being smaller than her sisters. (One ex. from BK 01 PT 04 - "[Mel] was the shortest of all of my siblings...") But, wouldn't she be the same size as Emily? If they are, indeed, genetically identical twins, there might be a slight variation in their looks (subtle physical things that let you tell one identical twin from the other), but their body sizes and shapes should be very close to one another. Same height, same boobs, same butt, etc. We know they share green eyes. So, why the later deviation when it comes to Mel? If they aren't identical, why describe them as the "spitting image" of each other? It's a minor matter in the overall story arc, but it sticks in my brain as an inconsistency.

A definite inconsistency is, in BK 01 PT 04, Amanda said, "Nick is trying out for Draugr". But, here in BK 02 PT 01, Craig's band has suddenly become "The Sufferers". Given Nick's assessment of the band's music, it seems the real "Sufferers" will be their audience. LOL

One other thing that's crossed my mind is that, in getting to know each other, Nick has been asked numerous times about his former, English girlfriends, but he never seems to ask about his sisters' romantic histories. We know about Amanda and Craig, but what about the other three? We, like Nick, know very little about who they've been with. It took Erica telling (threatening?) him, for him to find out that Emily was a virgin. And that leads me to wonder if, despite all of Mel's sexual "scientific experiments", she, too, might be a virgin? Hence, part of her hesitancy, above and beyond her promise to Emily (or perhaps the real cause behind it?). It would fit with her sorta nerdy vibe. All "book" learning, without much actual real life experience. I guess time will tell. I'm assuming that Nick and Mel finally consummating their relationship will occur in the next chapter, saving Amanda for the last to be with Nick.

All in all, I love the story so far, and my only disappointment is in having to wait now for the next chapter(s)! Binge-us interruptus! ARGH! ;-)

I'm looking forward to Nick getting with Mel and eventually conquering Amanda's hesitancy. I'm also going to speculate there will be an inevitable family band formation in the future.

Keep up the excellent work!

So good! This was definitely worth the wait. I can’t wait for the next part.

All of your writing is really good - loved Harem Sisters! - but you’ve taken it up a notch with this one. Much tighter (pun intended!). Keep it up!

Harem sisters is better to me. It moves forward and not just idle while we wait for other ladies to get the nerve or fulfill promises. This has that more intimate feel to it which is good for a story. Good stories are spread out and developed slowly but it’s been a little repetitive in sections. Might could have worked on Nick really talking to the ladies and getting some of why they are how they are. Even in earlier chapter he wanted to talk to Amanda when she was upset coming home from dickhead. Wanted offer a different perspective but asked is she was ok at the door and left as soon as she said just tired. Just asking for some better between sex material. Get our minds working a little. Thanks for writing

Really like it hope you continue both stories

OMG! I had no idea this was here until early this evening!! Naturally, I stopped everything else i was doing and started reading.. I just cannot believe Literotica doesn’t have an announcement up that book 2 has been opened!!

Now, as far as the story goes, …let me get to what’s important to you first. If there is just the tiniest drop of justice, the smallest atom of fairness ANYWHERE On this planet, then you will have received at least one Pulitzer prize for outstanding writing before you are done! No flattery, no bullshit, just fact!

There are many authors here that I enjoy. But it’s YOUR story that has me pacing the floor in the middle of the night mumbling “ ..if that arrogant asshole hurts Amanda I will make him BEG to die!! “

I have to go outside into the frigid air to remind myself it’s not real. This isn’t a news flash its a story!

And the finer little details of love making are so accurate. I mean does your wife mind you taking notes during sex?? Twice now you have sent me wayy back in old Al’s memory bank thinking of particularly intense sessions where it is beyond physical. It’s like something in your brain says “ okay buddy, you want to give her your all? everything you’ve got? Okay guy hereit is, but hang on to your ass because I’m taking no responsibility for what happens when the safety is off!”. And just like you say, he was literally on the edge of comatose. I actually passed out on top of one wonderful woman. Not for long, but I came around with her finger poking my forehead,saying my name and asking me if. I was alright. What could i say but the truth.. “ other than you just about killed me, yeah I am fine. “

Your story creates emotion and brings back some of life’s better memories.

Lust at First Sight is definitely one of my favorite reads! I really enjoy how you've brought to life each character, their own personalities, their desires. Excellent work! I cant wait for the next installment.

I'm enjoying the story, very much. Looking forward to the next installment. 😀

I love it bro, Amanda still didn't give in, I am dying to read the love making of Manda n Nick, dang

I have been following this story since I found it and have enjoyed the read. I think that Greg is hiding something from Amanda (like another woman based on what he was looking at on his phone) but that is just me. Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next installment of "Harem Sisters" as well.

Looking forward for the next installment for this and harem sisters.

Awesome story and I'm eager to read the next installment. This a great story along with Harem sisters. Keep up the great work.

The only thing wrong with this story is that it is not complete but I am more than willing to stand by and wait for the rest to flow. I have no pretense about being a writer as I can spin a yarn but the build up to the sexy scenes are beyond my abilities, so I will wait until the meal has been cooked and served and then I will enjoy. Cheers

One of the best of the harem and incest stories. Waiting for that to be happen with Amanda and Nick

Amanda and Nick!

Good going

OMG again! I’m so happy that Emily took the plunge, no I’m sorry, Nike took the plunge :-p. I just love this family! The family dynamics are a kick. Now I anxiously wait for the next part of the story.

It’s simply world class😇

Please continue! I want to see Amanda and Nick finally complete their love for each other...maybe even form a family band and get rid of Craig!

Amazing, just Amazing!!! Can't wait for Nick to tease Mel!

Wonderful to see an update - always a pleasure and hope all is going well! Youve left us eager for more! Thank you!

Really enjoying this series. It is a dream scenario, and I love all four of these girls already. You are pacing it very well. Keep going

Nick and Amanda yes, a family band yes, the girls mother trying to cause nightmares, Craig getting a couple of slaps, plus his uncle, yes. This is first class entertainment, the only trouble is that I have to be patient. Joking apart, thanks

It's a really good series no complaints from me on the story well except maybe having to wait so long for the next chapter lol just joking kinda but I do wish you would release the next chapters sooner please let us know if you have a idea when the next chapter will be released you still plenty of story to tell about this family so please do keep going

Nick stil the best in the game.. the only disappointment is that his real gets in the way of producing more.. man he is a talented writer I support him and go on his discord page when I can.. (fun community by the way )

Great series so far. Looking forward to the next installment, and I hope Nick and Amanda get together soon and Craig gets what he deserves...left on the outside looking in.

You detail the sex beautifully and even relate the frustration equally well with him and Mel. I seem to have a macabre fascination with this story, as part of it really draws me in, while part of it, not so much: on some level, I enjoy the premise of him getting all this "love" from his sisters, but yet some of it just seems "off," which I attribute partly to my reservations about possible "harem" stories.

That aside, I find most of the story plausible and realistic with fairly normal characters (some readers will like and dislike as in any tale). I do question Amanda being even remotely interested in Craig, as he is excessively selfish to the point of being narcissistic, something I find distasteful--but something you could remedy in a way--if you are a bit creative about it (since you've already mentioned Amanda would go for her bro IF he made the first move, albeit then you'd have to rework the band angle. There are also some run-ons and a few fragments due to needing better punctuation, so I would suggest a different editor (if you have one), given some of those did stop me in my tracks.

Solid story, solid writing and it intrigues me so far. 4

Can’t wait for more

I am a huge fan. These stories are compelling with true erotic art . your characters are complex and strong with humanity plus more emanating from each paragraph. Your have the ability to walk a fine line between teasing and tantalizing, and satisfying. I look forward to further adventures. If you need an editor I would love to assist Rich

Excellent story. Can't wait for more.

you should give details about foreplay like pussy eating face riding tits sucking .you must make nick burry his face in round bubble juicy Erica booty and and tray 69 position with her and with other girls.

Did Emily already have her hymen popped already?

When is the next chapter gonna come? You should make a 69 scene with Erica too. And spanking in Public amd touching and grabing booty while driving car pr in public.

I wanna see one or all his sisters pregnant. How interesting would the storyline would be.

Please don't forget about this amazing story, I've been eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I just got done reading this series up to this point. I’m now a fan of your work and will have to go and read your other stories. These are exceptionally well done. I’m looking forward to the next installment. THANKS!

Normal release 2 months it's been 3 don't forget you still have 2 more sisters looking forward to the next part let us know how much longer we have to wait on it keep up the good work

I hope you continue to do more follow-on stories in this series. You not only give us a storyline, but also throw in some great sexual content too. Suspense will be killi8ng me for more.

Hey man love your work any knowledge on when you’ll be posting the next chapter been waiting can’t wait to read it

Looking forward to the next installment of lust at first sight or harem sisters (preferably both). Well written, decent storylines. A few word use errors (possibly the difference between American and the Queen's English) does not detract from the stories readability. 5 stars

A great start to this second book. I am so looking forward to whatever you have planned. Thanks.

I know you are busy, we would like more please.

Thanks

Stop with the Craig guy damn he is fictional and I want to fuck him with a bass guitar sideways

I love this so much! Nick is great, and I love how the sisters have different characteristics and personalities, you can really tell them apart. The action is hot too. Can’t wait for the first time with Mel! :)

Hey man love your stories hopefully you add to this one soon been waiting while on the edge of my seat can’t wait to read the next chapter please keep us up-to-date looking forward to it and thanks for all the hard work you do.

Ok first off, you are absolutely insanely talented. Both sets of stories you've written are out of this world. I honestly can't wait to read more of either story or anything else you write. Just amazing!

you are a brilliant writer keep up the good work

When is the next part this is amazing

Please write the next chapter.

This is awesome!!! Each of the sisters feels so unique and different, and the fact that you can write up scenarios where no penetrative sex happens, but it’s still hot is nothing short of amazing. Every paragraph leaves such a rush of anticipation for whatever comes next! You have incredible writing skill! I cannot WAIT for the first time with Mel!! Thank you so much for this incredible story, and I’m looking forward to what’s next! :)

Loved it, More chapters, please. Great story. What happens next?

Outstanding story. I really appreciate your story telling especially on this story. Awesome. More chapters please. Yes, what happens next? Love this story.

Man,great job! i was waiting for next chapter for a year . -)

One of the best harem stories I’ve read on this site. I love the dynamic between all of the sisters and the teasing of future pairings. (Nick and Mel, Nick and Amanda) and I’m excited for the BDSM and the sisters (potentially?) getting involved with each other.

You rock! Thanks for this!

I am completely invested in this wonderful story and I hope it continues as I am dying to see how it all turns out

Both your stories have been very well written.

However, this one needs to continue to its conclusion. Nick has yet to be with Mel and Amanda.

He with his sisters has yet to form their own band. As referenced in your earlier story where Jason goes with Natalie and Cindy and sees Nick and his sisters perform.

So atleast 5-6 chapters more are awaited. Look forward to reading them.

More stories too please. How about one on mother son love?

Thank you 😊

Honestly, Ive been waiting for the next installment for six months. I've enjoyed the story line. Please move forward with this series.

I love everything about this series. Your sense of build up to actual sex between Nick and the sisters makes every scene of flirting and teasing an absolute joy to read. I love that the sisters have actual characteristics and personalities, they aren’t just completely slaving over Nick. The setups established have awesome potential too! I can’t wait for Nick and Mel to get together, as well as him and Amanda. Hoping that Craig’s band implodes and Nick and the sisters form their own.

Absolutely wonderful work here! Thanks so much! :D

Hey man is there any update on when the next part for your stories are coming out then waiting a while looking forward to reading more hopefully soon thanks and keep up the good work you’re a great writer

Wow!! This is amazing, so much real emotion written into every scene, and each of the girls has such a different take on life, love, and sex. I am loving both this and Harem Sisters, and cannot wait for more of both!!

So their super sexy super cool brother is a high school drop out whose working as a janitor? Wow sounds irresistible to me!

I have to say there is maybe 3 ro 6 elite writers here. U sir are one them. I truly hope u keep both series goingng. I love long series by great writers n while I wanna scream HURRY UP N WRITE lol I know we all have lives n it's very time consuming just know we are waiting as patiently as we can for the next chapter

Pleaseeeeeeeeee continuee!! I really loved thiss

I LOVE THIS STORY, WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER GOING TO BE RELEASED. JUST WANT IT TO KEEP GOING. AWESOME

Good story, a bit wordy, story line is repeated with the same words. The story is compelling and articulating as well graphically entertaining. It deserves my 5 🌟

This story is clearly written by the least incestuous Tasmanian xD

Love the story but, I want to see how it ends

I love this a lot! Amanda is my favorite and I like all the teasing and romantic moments between her and Nick. You’re fantastic at teasing future scenarios with the sisters. I’m looking forward to the first time with Mel, and wonder if BDSM will factor in with her, as it was mentioned that’ll be coming.

Looking forward to more! You’re awesome. :)

Hey man any updates on when you’re going to continue it’s been quite a while since we’ve added another chapter

Hope you’re doing okay! Love this story! The sex is really hot and the foreshadowing of future encounters with the sisters is great! :) One of the top harem stories I’ve read on this site.

I would love to read Amanda getting impregnated by Nick so much